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Viceroy CC refrence by Mango-Rain Viceroy CC refrence by Mango-Rain
My reference sheet for the character I want to have in :iconchernobyl-curs:

Her name is Viceroy, after the butterfly: [link]

She's a papillion 8D I like papillions... XD

Name: Viceroy
Breed Base: Papillion
Age: SHE doesn't know, but about three years.
Gender: Female, though she is often mistaken for male
Abilities: Huge retractable fangs. (also has a faint telepathic link to her companion, but that doesn't help her with fighting.)
Strengths: Her fangs are good for stabbing or slashing, she is very agile and quick.
Weaknesses: She is tiny, and not very strong, she is deaf and blind on one side, and if anything touches her bandaged leg the pain is immobilizing.
Personality: Viceroy is always happy. All the time. VERY VERY HAPPY. Almost nothing can keep her from being happy, not even injury. She is always giggling, and it often spirals into uncontrollable fits of laughter. She is also very spacey, often just staring into the clouds. She is very good at finding shapes in the clouds, however, this is an incredibly useless skill. She is obsessed with killing, and she will eat anything. Put the two together, and you get her favorite meal- Dog. Though she really can only kill weak, and/or small dogs, her fangs can badly wound a dog of any size. Her jaws are pretty strong.
History: Her great-grandfather and great-grandmother were pets 25 years ago. Their owners evacuated and left them. They had a child, and that was Viceroy's grandfather father He had a child, and that was her father. Her father bred with a mutt, and Viceroy was born to that mutt. Her mother was almost never around, so she practically raised herself. One day, her mother left for almost a week. She had not been taught to hunt, and so she almost starved. When her mother returned, she was mad with hunger. In the ensuing battle, her mother gouged her eye out, and badly injured one leg. But in the end, Viceroy won, and she killed and ate her mother. At the smell of fresh meat, a black and white kitten approached her. Her mother was a fair bit bigger than Viceroy, so Viceroy shared. That kitten has followed her ever since, and it is now an adult cat. Viceroy named it Kalyna after her mother, who was their first shared meal. Kalyna and Viceroy live alone, wandering the streets, and killing (not always for food) when they can.
Likes: Butterflies, cats, Kalyna, dog-meat, blood and gore, the feeling of her fangs sinking into flesh.
Dislikes: Being cold, other dogs, anyone coming up to her on her blind/deaf side.
Other: 1.She was born deaf in one ear, it wasn't caused by anything.
2. She can't understand Kalyna's meows, but they have a faint telepathic link- They have to be touching, and they can only see images, and there is no sound at all.

Companion stuff:

Name: Kalyna
Species: Feline (feral cat)
Gender:Female
Looks: Long haired white cat, with a black tail, and a black back. Green eyes. Large for a cat, 12" at the shoulder, and 10 lbs. (so, tall and skinny.)
Personality: Calm, quiet, stealthy. Very calculating and manipulative. (but obviously can only manipulate other cats.)


EDIT: Changed it, I hope this is okay now?
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:iconsongdog-strayfang:
Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
A true ankle-biter. Ankle-nommer.
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:iconmango-rain:
Mango-Rain Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha indeed XD
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Hucca Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011
Daw, I adore this girls personality! Such a darling little psychopath!
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:iconmango-rain:
Mango-Rain Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hee hee thank you! x3
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D Bahaha, she's totally cute! I always love adorable psychos.

Good luck! I hope you get into Round 1!
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:iconmango-rain:
Mango-Rain Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you x3 And I like adorable psychos too XD

Thanks, and you too! You have that acid spitting-no eyed dog, right?
I may have Pox cameo in my audition, she's just too cute :3
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why, yes. Yes I do |D
Hahaha, I'm really tempted to do a really psycho ravey picture of the two of them. But I also want to include Aspenfrost's character and she doesnt seem the psycho rave type.
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Mango-Rain Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*looks at aspen's*
haha, yeah maybe not the psycho ravey type. XD
maybe Kite could just get her own picture from you?
Not that you are obliged to draw anything for anyone, but...
erm, *scuttles off*
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahaha, XD Maybe.
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AmiliaLongTail Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Delightful little psychopath, isn't she? XD

Welcome to the tourney~
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:iconmango-rain:
Mango-Rain Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed XD

Thank you! (blarg I have just discovered that my style of drawing flip-flops all over when drawing Viceroy xD)
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, here's our review.

First of all, the color pattern on the tail is way too complicated. You have to keep in mind your opponents will have to draw it over and over again in panel after panel of a comic. It needs to be much simpler.

We'll also need a visual for Kalyna before we can accept any audition pages.

While your character is balanced in strengths and weaknesses, there are several logistical issues that really don't make much sense.

The first and foremost is that leg. There is no way at all she could possibly be alive with that leg. That's pure muscle exposed to the air. Even assuming she somehow, through some miracle, survived the blood loss, she would die from a raging infection. Creatures have skin for a reason.

Second, her teeth. While it's fine that she has the extendable teeth, saying her bite strength is the strongest thing about her is kind of off. Think about it logistically; in order to bite anything with those things, she would have to open her jaw so wide that her mouth would be practically vertical. Fangs like that are unwieldy and hard to bite with, that's part of why saber toothed tigers went extinct. The most she could do would be to slash with those fangs, bite pressure really wouldn't come into it.

Finally, you state that her great grandparents gave birth to her father. They would have given birth to her grandparents, not her great grandparents.
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Mango-Rain Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for all the feedback! (if only I could have someone do that for all my characters! xD)

I changed the stuff that you said, is it okay now? <:]
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You still talk about her jaw being the strongest thing about her, but otherwise it looks good so we'll add our reference to the group. We look forward to your audition.
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Mango-Rain Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Blah I forgot about that bit xD
I'll change that right nooowww
and hurraaaayy!! :>
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